[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-01.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-evain-ebu-urn-01.txt Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: 15 November 2007 IETF LC End Date: 10 December 2007 Summary: This draft is on the right track, but has open issues, described in the review. Comments: There is one minor open issue, but it does cause syntactic ambiguity, and hence needs to be fixed: Declaration of structure: URNs assigned by EBU will have the following hierarchical structure based on the organisational structure of the EBU resources: urn:tva:{category}:{string} where "{category}" and "{string}" are US-ASCII strings that conforms to URN Syntax requirements ([RFC2141]). The issue is that the use of the colon character (":") in {category} needs to be prohibited in order to protect the colon used as a delimiter between {category} and {string}. In addition, it may also be appropriate to prohibit use of some or all additional <other> characters defined in Section 2.2 of RFC 2141 in {category} beyond prohibiting the colon character - such a prohibition would apply the same syntax rules rules to {category} as apply to the Namespace ID ("ebu"). Nits: (1) Declared registrant of the namespace: Name: jean-Pierre Evan Should "jean" be capitalized? Is there an "i" missing in "Evan"? (2) Declaration of structure: URNs assigned by EBU will have the following hierarchical structure based on the organisational structure of the EBU resources: urn:tva:{category}:{string} "tva" --> "ebu" (3) 3. Examples The following examples are not guaranteed to be real. They are presented for pedagogical reasons only. urn:ebu:metadata:pmeta:2007 urn:ebu:metadata:cs:EscortCS:2007 urn:other:anytype:version The third example ("urn:other:anytype:version") should be removed. (4) idnits 2.05.01 found a possible boilerplate problem: Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- ** The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.5 (updated by RFC 4748) Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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