[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-melnikov-mmhs-header-fields-04

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Thu, 20 October 2011 01:57 UTC

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Document: draft-melnikov-mmhs-header-fields-04
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2011-10-19
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-10-20

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3.10:
   It
   may includes
SHOULD BE:
   It
   may include