[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-3-in-1-encoding-08
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 22 February 2012 23:40 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-3-in-1-encoding-08
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pcn-3-in-1-encoding-08 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-2-23 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 1 4th paragraph "tunnelling"