Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-alt-mark-08

Giuseppe Fioccola <giuseppe.fioccola@huawei.com> Thu, 12 August 2021 15:09 UTC

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From: Giuseppe Fioccola <giuseppe.fioccola@huawei.com>
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Hi Stewart,
I plan to revise the draft in the coming weeks to address the comments from the ADs. I will double check your concerns as well.

Thanks,

Giuseppe

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Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-alt-mark-08

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Not Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-alt-mark-08
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-08-12
IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-15
IESG Telechat date: 2021-08-12

Summary: I egret being late with this review. The majority of the concerns raised in my review of -06 appear to remain in the document, and all of the important ones have been picked up by the ADs.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: