Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review: draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-17

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Tue, 02 December 2014 17:20 UTC

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>> When you suggest saying more, are you suggesting saying more in the
>> document?
>
> I mostly meant the writeup - I expect there will be IESG folks with the same
> questions I had.

I can do that, sure.

>    This document updates:
>     ...
>    c) IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP Version 2.0 Second Edition [PWG5100.12], by
>       extending section 4 'IPP Standards' and section 10 'Security
>       Considerations'.
>
> This RFC-to-be is updating an IEEE-ISTO PWG document, and that seems
> exceptional enough to warrant mention about how the organizations
> are coordinating that update.

I'd think that's for PWG to address on their side, no?  If they accept
that they can have an IETF RFC formally updating one of their
documents, that's their process, not ours, no?

Barry