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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 16 February 2021 21:05 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02
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Dan, thanks for your review. I agree with your point and hope to see some text added to address this. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Feb 4, 2021, at 9:56 AM, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 2021-02-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-08
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This Document is Ready with one issue that I would suggest to clarify and
> possibly apply edits before approval.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> If my understanding is correct this document together with 7483bis will replace
> RFC 7482 and RFC 7483 and advance them to Internet Standard. Sections 7 and 8
> will be taken out from the final published RFC. I believe that the relationship
> with RFC 7482 needs to be detailed either in the Introduction or in a dedicated
> version, in order to clarify for future readers and users the status of the 2 /
> 4 documents. I also believe that a shortened version of the 'Changes from RFC
> 7482' section now an Appendix should be included in the text of the document in
> its final form.
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
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