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Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 18 November 2017 08:52 UTC

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> On Nov 18, 2017, at 2:34 PM, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) <acmorton@att.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for your review, Meral,
> we’ll make these changes in -14.

Yes, thank you for your review, Meral!

Kathleen 
>  
> regards,
> Al
>  
> From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com] 
> Sent: Friday, November 17, 2017 7:54 PM
> To: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt.all@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
> …
> Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2017-11-17
> IETF LC End Date:  2017-12-04
> IESG Telechat date: NA
>  
> Summary:
> This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC.
>  
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
> Nits/editorial comments:
> -[Page 33], Section 6, "inlcudes"---->"includes"
> -[Page 34], Section 6.2, "soltuions"---->"solutions"
> -[Page 35], typo "7.1.  Effect of Encypted ACKs"--->"7.1.  Effect of Encrypted ACKs"
> -[Page 37], Section 7.3, point 3 is empty.
> -Please change the few occurrences of “middle box” to  “middlebox”
>  
> Best Regards,
> Meral
> ---
> Meral Shirazipour
> Ericsson Research
> www.ericsson.com

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