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"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com> Sat, 18 November 2017 07:43 UTC

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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com>
To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, "draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt.all@ietf.org" <draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt.all@ietf.org>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thanks for your review, Meral,
we'll make these changes in -14.

regards,
Al

From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com]
Sent: Friday, November 17, 2017 7:54 PM
To: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt.all@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
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Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-11-17
IETF LC End Date:  2017-12-04
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 33], Section 6, "inlcudes"---->"includes"
-[Page 34], Section 6.2, "soltuions"---->"solutions"
-[Page 35], typo "7.1.  Effect of Encypted ACKs"--->"7.1.  Effect of Encrypted ACKs"
-[Page 37], Section 7.3, point 3 is empty.
-Please change the few occurrences of "middle box" to  "middlebox"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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