[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-bfd-generic-04.txt
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Mon, 05 May 2008 16:54 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-bfd-generic-04.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-bfd-generic-04.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 5 May 2008 IESG Telechat date: 7 May 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. One formatting nit: I would advise to move the Security Considerations and IANA Consideration sections so that they occur before the references section. On a first glance, I thought that the draft did not have these sections. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: vkg@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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