[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-drinks-usecases-requirements-06

Roni Even <Even.roni@huawei.com> Thu, 29 September 2011 16:33 UTC

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Date: Thu, 29 Sep 2011 19:34:15 +0300
From: Roni Even <Even.roni@huawei.com>
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Document: draft-ietf-drinks-usecases-requirements-06

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2011-9-29

IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-3

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.  

 

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