[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hip-esp-05
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-hip-esp-05 Reviewer: David Black Review Date: 30 March 2007 IESG Telechat date: 05 April 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Comments: The nit found in the Gen-ART review of the -04 version has been corrected, and in addition, the authors found and fixed another instance of it not noted in the review. idnits 2.04.03 can't figure out the intended status for the draft, so it assumes Proposed Standard and complains about the resulting downref to the Experimental HIP Base draft ;-). draft-ietf-ipsec-rfc2401bis-06 has been published as RFC 4301, so this reference needs to be removed as RFC 4301 is already referenced. The RFC Editor will catch this. Several of the referenced Internet-Drafts have been updated. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art