[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-iana-rfced-extns-01
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Fri, 22 April 2011 12:00 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-iana-rfced-extns-01
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-iana-rfced-extns-01 Review Date: 2011-04-22 IETF LC End Date: 2011-05-02 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 2.1. IANA Information To Be Added to the Datatracker Currently, IANA reviews and touches documents at 4 different stages in the process from I-D to RFC for IETF stream documents: Last Call, IESG Review, Document Approval (for publication), and RFC Publication. Most of these state changes and issues are not captured in the Datatracker. For IRTF and INDEPENDENT, Nit: I think adding "Stream Submissions" after the "INDEPENDENT" would add a bit of clarity. the IANA review process begins when IESG Review is requested. ID-nits reports: Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist : ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 11 characters in excess of 72. Miscellaneous warnings: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- == Line 164 has weird spacing: '...ts have been ...' I believe both of these issues can be fixed by the RFC Editor. -- The document has a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but was first submitted on or after 10 November 2008. Does it really need the disclaimer?
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea… Alexey Melnikov