[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-register-srtp-02

Enrico Marocco <enrico.marocco@telecomitalia.it> Thu, 22 April 2010 08:28 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-avt-register-srtp-02
Reviewer: Enrico Marocco
Review Date: 2010-04-22
IESG Telechat date: 2010-04-22

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard. I found a minor nit that would be fixed by the Editor anyway.

Note: The main issue with this document -- whether the proposed update
is the best way to allow Informational RFCs to register new crypto
transforms -- should be addressed within the IESG and does not depend on
the quality of this document.

Minor nit: "SRTP" should be expanded in the Abstract.

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Ciao,
Enrico