[Gen-art] Gen Art LC & TC review of draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-06
Avshalom Houri <AVSHALOM@il.ibm.com> Tue, 01 December 2009 15:04 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC & TC review of draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-06
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-06 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-12-01 IETF Last Call date: 2009-12-02 IESG Telechat date: 2009-12-03 Summary: The document is ready to be published as a standard track RFC and the document is a reasonable basis on which to build the salient part of the Internet Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Line 643 defined a network architecture[WMF]. Furthermore, WiMAX has --> defined a network architecture [WMF]. Furthermore, WiMAX has Thanks --Avshalom
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