[Gen-art] review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 15 February 2017 12:58 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170210 IETF LC End Date: 20170214 IESG Telechat date: 20170224 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 1 and 3 page 3 (title): Benefitting -> Benefiting - 3 page 3 (suggest): CoRE etc, -> CoRE, etc, - 4 page 3: reading the document I had a question about the "no need ... to specify the internal structure" but the reason became clear the next page. So I have no concern about this. Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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