Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipping-cc-transfer-10.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 06 October 2008 21:58 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipping-cc-transfer-10.txt
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Thanks Alan, there are clearly no show stoppers here, just a few points where you can consider clarifying the text. > AJ> No, the call flows are not normative - there are too many > variations to do this. I definitely suggest saying that in the text in a slightly more formal way. > AJ> Are you concerned about being in a video session with one party > then suddenly being in a video session with another party? Or are you > concerned that an audio call could suddenly add video after a transfer > without getting the user's permission? If the latter, this is an issue > that we should have dealt with in Replaces RFC 3891. The latter. It might be worth a small note in the Security section; I can see that it's a generic issue with Replaces, but it seems especially acute in the case of a transfer to a 3rd party, and the UA should at least warn the user. ("Smile, you're on TV" ;-) Brian On 2008-10-07 04:25, Alan Johnston wrote: > Brian, > > Thanks for your review of the document. See my answers and comments > below marked with AJ> > > Thanks, > Alan > > > Brian E Carpenter wrote: >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > Document: draft-ietf-sipping-cc-transfer-10.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2008-10-06 > IETF LC End Date: 2008-10-10 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: Almost ready > > Comments: > > This looks almost ready but I have some questions for clarification. > I have not reviewed the call flows and examples in detail. > >> 4. Requirements > > I'm not sure why the RFC2119 upper case keywords are used in > this section; it isn't specifying either a protocol or operational > practices. > > AJ> You are correct - when these requirements were written (about 5 > years ago), this was common but perhaps it is not now. I'm fine with > removing the RFC 2119 keywords. > >> 5. Using REFER to achieve Call Transfer >> >> A REFER [RFC3515] can be issued by the Transferor to cause the >> Transferee to issue an INVITE to the Transfer-Target. > Conversely, I found it hard in sections 5 through 11 to figure out > what was normative and what was illustrative. Does that "can be" > imply that there may be another method? > > AJ> Yes - there are many approaches to achieve a call transfer with > SIP. It can be done using 3PCC, re-INVITE, or a B2BUA. However, only > the usage of REFER requires SIP extensions and conventions - hence this > document. > > I found no MUSTs, two SHOULDs, > one NOT RECOMMENDED, and one MAY. There are some lower case > "shoulds" - are they normative? > AJ> Here are the lower case shoulds and one lower case must: > > Section 5: > > "If the nature of > the Contact URI is not known or if support for the target-dialog > extension is not known, the REFER should be sent inside the existing > dialog. A Transferee must be prepared to receive a REFER either > inside or outside a dialog. " > > Section 6: > > "The participants in a basic transfer should indicate support for the > REFER and NOTIFY methods in Allow header fields in INVITE, 200 OK to > INVITE, and OPTIONS messages. Participants should also indicate > support for Target-Dialog in the Supported header field." > > Section 7.3: > > " The Contact URI of the Transfer Target SHOULD be used by the > Transferor as the Refer-To URI, unless the URI is suspected or known > to not be routable outside the dialog. Otherwise, the Address of > Record (AOR) of the Transfer Target should be used. That is, the > same URI that the Transferor used to establish the session with the > Transfer Target should be used. In case the triggered INVITE is > routed to a different User Agent than the Transfer Target, the > Require: replaces header field should be used in the triggered > INVITE. (This is to prevent an incorrect User Agent which does not > support Replaces from ignoring the Replaces and answering the INVITE > without a dialog match.)" > > AJ> I'm OK with making these shoulds normative and the one must. > > Are the call flows normative? If so, > I think this should be stated explicitly in section 5. > > AJ> No, the call flows are not normative - there are too many > variations to do this. > > [I-D.ietf-sip-gruu] seems to me to be a normative reference. > It's the only mechanism offered to solve the problem of knowing whether > a "Contact URI is routable outside a dialog" and it's used in 6.1 > and 7.3 and listed as "supported" throughout the examples. > > AJ> No, it is not the only way. See Section 5: > > " One way that a Transferor could know > that a Contact URI is routable outside a dialog is by validation > (e.g. sending an OPTIONS and receiving a response) or if it satisfies > the properties described in the GRUU specification > [I-D.ietf-sip-gruu]." > > Also, note that this spec doesn't require the GRUU specification and > mechanism, but just GRUU properties in the Contact URI. The working > group has discussed this a few times and each time agreed to not make > GRUU mandatory or normative to this document. > > ≠≠≠≠____________________________________________________________ > Minor questions: > >> 4. Requirements >> >> 1. Any party in a SIP session MUST be able to transfer any other >> party in that session at any point in that session. > > Does "at any point" include session establishment and teardown? > > AJ> No, once either side has sent a BYE, the session is dead and there > is no way to perform a transfer. > >> 5. Using REFER to achieve Call Transfer > ... >> The media negotiated between the transferee and the >> transfer target is not affected by the media that had been negotiated >> between the transferor and the transferee. > > I have a small concern about privacy issues there. For example, could the > Transfer-Target find itself in a video session after a transfer, both > unexpectedly and unintentionally from the user's point of view? > > AJ> Are you concerned about being in a video session with one party > then suddenly being in a video session with another party? Or are you > concerned that an audio call could suddenly add video after a transfer > without getting the user's permission? If the latter, this is an issue > that we should have dealt with in Replaces RFC 3891. RFC 3891 tends to > assume that the same media types are in both the replaced and replacing > sessions. It does talk about rejecting the INVITE if the replacing > media type is incompatible, but this doesn't cover a case of adding a > new media type. The solution to this would be for the recipient of the > INVITE with Replaces alert the user of any new media types before > accepting them, or only accept the same media types as the replaced > session and declining any new media types. The new media types could > then be explicitly turned on by either party using a re-INVITE which > would trigger normal authorization policies and procedures. > > > > ≠≠≠≠____________________________________________________________ > Typo at the end of section 11.1: > > (This might easily be missed in editing.) > >> If the >> gateway supports more than one truck group, > > s/truck/trunk/ > > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipping… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip… Alan Johnston
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip… Brian E Carpenter