[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-intarea-router-alert-considerations-06.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Wed, 13 July 2011 08:55 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-intarea-router-alert-considerations-06.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 2011-07-13 IESG Telechat date: 2011-07-14 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits: - Make sure that "Router Alert Option" is written with capital "O" across the document. There are a few instances with a lower "o". - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: ASIC Regards, Miguel G. -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
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