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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-08

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 11 April 2017 19:05 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-08
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Pete, thank you for your review.
Alissa

> On Apr 6, 2017, at 1:52 AM, Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Pete Resnick
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-??
> Reviewer: Pete Resnick
> Review Date: 2017-04-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-06
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: Looks fine from a non-security-expert's
> perspective. It is my duty to ask about keyid in section 2.1:
> 
>      A "keyid" parameter SHOULD be a UTF-8
>      [RFC3629] encoded string, particularly where the identifier
> might
>      need to appear in a textual form.
> 
> I presume that simply means "might need to be rendered" and does not
> include "might need to be typed in by someone", correct? The former is
> easy; the latter probably requires a bit more text.
> 
>

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