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Karl Heinz Wolf <karlheinz.wolf@nic.at> Fri, 17 December 2010 08:29 UTC

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From: Karl Heinz Wolf <karlheinz.wolf@nic.at>
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Roni,

thank you for your review and please apologize my delayed response.
I agree to your comments, the 2. one is really a good catch!

Thank you,
Karl



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Von: ietf-bounces@ietf.org im Auftrag von Roni Even
Gesendet: Sa 12/4/2010 4:41
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Betreff: Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary
 
Hi,

 

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

 

Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2010-12-04

IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-14

IESG Telechat date: (if known)

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. There are some nits

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.      In the abstract the document starts with LoST,  Please expand to Location-to-Service Translation

2.      At the end of section 3.2  in the note, I think that the first "getServiceListBoundary" should be " getServiceBoundary"

 

 

 

Roni Even

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