Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-snmp-cfg-06
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 17 September 2014 13:08 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-snmp-cfg-06
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Thanks for your review, Roni. Jari On 11 Aug 2014, at 00:41, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-netmod-snmp-cfg-06 > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date:2014–8-10 > IETF LC End Date: 2014–8-12 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. > > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Section 2 “This allows to add configuration” should be “this allows adding configuration” >