[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-refuse-any-07

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 31 August 2018 21:52 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-refuse-any-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-08-31
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-04
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 5] "those avialable "---typo-->"those available "
-[Page 6] "in this seection "---typo-->"in this section"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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