[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nsis-qos-nslp-17.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Thu, 26 November 2009 15:13 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nsis-qos-nslp-17.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nsis-qos-nslp-17.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 2009-11-26 IETF LC End Date: 2009-11-26 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC. I must say that I didn't have time to review the whole document, but just about 25% of it. I also reviewed the IANA considerations section. I found a quality and well written draft, with just a couple of nits. Note that idnits reports two cases of downref: ** Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental draft: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp (ref. 'I-D.ietf-nsis-ntlp') ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational draft: draft-ietf-nsis-qspec (ref. 'I-D.ietf-nsis-qspec') From my perspective, the document seems to be ready for publication. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nsis-qos-n… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nsis-q… Magnus Westerlund