[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-05
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 26 September 2012 03:03 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-9-25 IETF LC End Date: 2012-10-3 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3.1 Duplicate Address Dectection should be Duplicate Address Detection.