Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07

Thanks for your review, Christer! (Authors, did you see the editorial comments?)

Jari

On 24 Feb 2014, at 10:24, Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

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> Document:                         draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07
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> Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg
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> Review Date:                     24 February 2014
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> IETF LC End Date:             7 February 2014
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> IETF Telechat Date:         N/A
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> Summary:        I provided comments on a previous version (-05) of this document. Unfortunately I can’t find the reply to my comments from the authors, so some of my comments may not have been valid, or the authors may have disagreed with my change suggestions.
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> However, when I check the -07 version of the document I see that some of my comments have not been addressed, so I’ll re-submit them again - just in case.
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> Major Issues: None
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> Minor Issues: None
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> Editorial nits:
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> Section 1:
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> Q_1_1:
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> I assume "LLN" stands for "Low power and Lossy Networks", but there is no extension anywhere. Please insert "Low power and Lossy Networks (LLN)" on first occurance.
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> Section 3:
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> Q_3_1:
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> In a few places the text says "this protocol". I would suggest to replace that with "MPL".
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> Section 4:
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> Q_4_2:
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> I would suggest to add something in front of "Overview" in the subject of section 4.3. Overview of what? :)
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> Regards,
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> Christer
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07

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