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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-dot-12

Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> Thu, 31 August 2017 02:42 UTC

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From: Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 22:41:35 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-dot-12
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Yup, Adam Roach caught that as well and the document will be updated with
some new text:

	This section specifies considerations for systems involved in domain
name resolution
	when resolving queries for names ending with '.home.arpa.'.  Each
item in this section
	addresses some aspect of the DNS or the process of resolving domain
names that would be
	affected by this special use allocation.  Detailed explanations of
these items can be
	found in <xref target="RFC6761"/>, Section 5.


On Wed, Aug 30, 2017 at 10:34 PM, Dale R. Worley <worley@ariadne.com> wrote:

> Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> writes:
> > I've updated the document to separate this out into three lettered
> > subheads.   We can't change the numbering, because that's required by
> > RFC 6761, but I agree that it's clearer if the three separate topics
> > are split out.
>
> I hadn't realized from the draft that the items in section 4 are meant
> to parallel the items in section 5 of RFC 6761, since the connecting
> text is only "(as per [RFC 6761])".  Perhaps it would help to amplify
> that to "(per the template in [RFC 6761] section 5)".
>
> Dale
>

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