[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-mip4-nemo-v4-base-08.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Fri, 08 February 2008 14:14 UTC
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From: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-mip4-nemo-v4-base-08.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 8 February 2008 IETF LC Date: 5 April 2006 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC. Comments: In the Introduction, the draft refers to itself as "this draft". Something like "this specification" would be better. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org http://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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