[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of LC draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of LC draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.An.Garcia@nokia.com> Review Date: 2007-01-07 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2007-01-11 Summary: The document is ready for publication Comments: I performed the Gen-ART review of version -02 of the document, where a few issues were outlined. These issues have been properly addressed and the document is ready for publication. Note: the IDnits tool indicates a few warnings, which may be also addressed by the RFC Editor at a later stage, but if there is a need for a new revision of the draft, these nits should be taken into account. ------------ idnits 1.123 tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt: tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(651): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'y RFC number)' tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(652): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'y RFC number)' tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(676): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'y RFC number)' tmp/draft-ietf-ccamp-automesh-03.txt(677): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'y RFC number)' Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate... the boilerplate looks good. No nits found. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of 1id-guidelines.txt yet). Miscellaneous warnings: - The copyright year in the IETF Trust Copyright Line does not match the current year Experimental warnings: - Unused Reference: 'RFC1194' is defined on line 544, but not referenced '[RFC1194] Zimmerman, D., "Finger User Information Protocol", RFC 1...' No nits found. -------------- BR, Miguel Garcia -- Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586 sip:miguel.garcia@neonsite.net Nokia Research Center Helsinki, Finland _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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