[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mboned-interdomain-peering-bcp-10

[Christer Holmberg <[e-mail]>]

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Document:                       draft-ietf-mboned-interdomain-peering-bcp-10.txt

Reviewer:                         Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                   2 September 2017

IETF LC End Date:           23 August 2017

IETF Telechat Date:        N/A



Summary: The document is well written. However, there are a couple of issues that I'd like the authors to address.


Major Issues: None



Minor Issues:



Q1: The Introduction talks about the growing usage of multicast, and the it begins the list what the document does. But, what is the background and need for the document? Is there a problem? Are there interoperability issues? At the end of the section it is said that ways to improve are identified, but it is unclear exactly what needs to be improved. I think it would be good to say a few words in the Introduction about the issues and problems.


Editorial Issues:

Q2: The title of section 4 is "Supporting Functionality". That seems a little strange in my eyes. Supporting functionality of what?