[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-rmt-pi-norm-revised-11
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Mon, 11 May 2009 21:49 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-rmt-pi-norm-revised-11
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-rmt-pi-norm-revised-11.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: May 11, 2009 IESG Telechat date: May 11, 2009 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. The draft has 0 major issues, 0 minor issues, and 2 Nits/Editorial comments. Nits/Editorial: 1) In S8, you may want to expand the acronym "DBS" (I think you mean Direct Broadcast Satellite, but I am not sure.) 2) In S10, there is a phrase, "(and these are not Negative)" -- is this a leftover from previous edit sessions? Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA) Email: vkg@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org} Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-rmt-pi-no… Vijay K. Gurbani