[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-lwig-cellular-04

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 14 August 2015 02:13 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-lwig-cellular-04
     Building Power-Efficient CoAP Devices for Cellular Networks
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 13-Auguest-2015
IETF LC End Date: 24-August-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: N/A