Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 09 May 2018 19:31 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Francis, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On May 9, 2018, at 9:42 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> Got this review stalled on my desk...
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20180419
> IETF LC End Date: 201805xx
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> None about 08 version. Looking for 08-11 differences: looks fine.
> Spell checker notices nothing interesting (but found the claimc :-)
> 
> Regards
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> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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