[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 09 May 2018 14:11 UTC

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Got this review stalled on my desk...

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Document: draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180419
IETF LC End Date: 201805xx
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 None about 08 version. Looking for 08-11 differences: looks fine.
 Spell checker notices nothing interesting (but found the claimc :-)

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr