[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06
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This document appears to be ready give or take some editorial nits which will be picked up by the RFC Editor. I will file my list of nits when I have more time. I already messaged Brian to let him know my conclusions on the Last call. Regards, Elwyn (from the Blue Mountains in Australia) _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art