[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-14
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-14 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2009-12-14 IETF LC End Date: 2009-12-14 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: Appendix A.2: RDM model This is redundant (expands to "Russian Dolls Model model")
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-emer… McCann Peter-A001034
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-… Francois Le Faucheur