Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
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Hi Alissa/Joel,

Thanks for your review. I've accepted and updated the draft for Joel's editorial comment below.

A v19 of the draft has just been posted which includes these changes along with others that I had pending in my buffer from Alvaro's AD review and other IESG last call reviews.

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-19 

Thanks,
Ketan

-----Original Message-----
From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>; 
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To: Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant@cisco.com>;; Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>;
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; idr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

Joel, thanks for your review. Ketan, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Apr 8, 2019, at 2:06 AM, Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant@cisco.com>; wrote:
> 
> Hi Joel,
> 
> Thanks for your review. I've taken note of the nit that you pointed out (it was also pointed by Alvaro on his review of v18). I have it in my edit buffer and will include in the next update.
> 
> Thanks,
> Ketan
> 
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> To: gen-art@ietf.org
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> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2019-04-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-17
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.
> 
> Major issues: N/A
> 
> Minor issues: N/A
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
>    Section 3 begins "his section".  I expect that should be "This section".
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