[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-yang-12

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 12 December 2017 07:55 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-pim-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-12-11
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

I reviewed the document but am not a yang expert.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: