[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-media-type-regs-10.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 30 May 2012 12:59 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-media-type-regs-10.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120523
IETF LC End Date: 20120521
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 3: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 4.2.5 page 12: missing "." in:
understood by implementors The
^
- 4.6 page 17: servies -> services
- 7 page 26: suffx -> suffix
- 8 page 27: Registions -> Registrations
and mutiple -> multiple
- 9 page 27: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
Regards
Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
PS: I want to signal the high quality of this document, for instance I got the idea to check
where the types are case-insensitive and I found it in 10 seconds from the printed version
(i.e., no grep :-)!
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-media-type… Francis Dupont
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-media-… Ned Freed