[Gen-art] Re: [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11

Rakesh Gandhi <rgandhi.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 07 October 2024 12:00 UTC

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From: Rakesh Gandhi <rgandhi.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 07 Oct 2024 07:59:58 -0400
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Thank you Roni for the review of the draft.

FYI:
We have addressed your comments in the revised draft.

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Thanks again,
Rakesh



On Sun, Sep 1, 2024 at 11:46 PM Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
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>
> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2024-09-01
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-09-06
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> The document is ready to be published as a standard track rFC with nits
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> In section 4.2.2 first paragraph “ the response messages are preferred to
> be
> sent back in-band on the same link ”  do you mean “the response messages
> SHOULD
> be sent …”
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