[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-kelly-saag-des-implications-04.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Fri, 01 September 2006 07:02 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-kelly-saag-des-implications-04.txt
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-kelly-saag-des-implications-04 Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 1 September 2006 IETF LC Date: 28 August 2006 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Comments: Expand DES in the title. The first time an acronym appears in the text, it should be together with its expansion. Alternatively, the first time the expansion of an acronym appears in the text, it should be together with the acronym (e.g., EFF, IV). Section 4.1: s/affect/effect/ Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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