[Gen-art] Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 13 February 2017 21:42 UTC
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Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2017-02-13 IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-09 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication as part of BCP 14. I personally find the first bullet in the NEW section to be chatty, and think it could be reduced while strengthening the message, but enough eyes have been on this that I don't object to it going through as is. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01 Robert Sparks
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-updat… Barry Leiba