[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics-25

Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 18 February 2024 14:52 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics-25

Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics-25
Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review Date: 2024-02-18
IETF LC End Date: 2024-02-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document contains the BCP for OAuth 2.0

It is well written, with a clear structure, and it contains a wealth of useful information.

Thank you, editors and the OAUTH WG for an excellent document.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

I have filed a PR to fix a few typos.

[1] https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/pull/90

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-o… Thomas Fossati via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Daniel Fett