Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-has-no-identity-04

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Tue, 19 April 2022 16:30 UTC

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> I think the editorial suggestions below make sense and hope the
> authors will consider them.

they were, mostly in -06 and one still in an emacs buffer due to a
mistake on my part.

randy