[Gen-art] Gen-ART (telechat) review of draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-18
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Thu, 07 February 2013 10:52 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART (telechat) review of draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-18
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-18 Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2013-02-07 IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-07 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: None Minor issues: In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference. The whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere. In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397). In the same section I see: o Section 3.3 IANA registers acceptable location URI schemes (or types) for use by this specification. Clients MUST reject URI schemes not currently registered in IANA. The last sentence looks wrong. Firstly, you already restrict the list of acceptable URIs to the list specified in Section 3.3. Secondly, what does this requirement mean exactly? Is the client required to fetch the list of registered URIs from iana.org (I hope not)? I suggest just deleting the last sentence. In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART (telechat) review of draft-ietf… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART (telechat) review of draft-… James Polk
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART (telechat) review of draft-… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART (telechat) review of draft-… James Polk