[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-04

"McCann Peter-A001034" <pete.mccann@motorola.com> Mon, 23 February 2009 17:24 UTC

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

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Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-04
Reviewer: Peter J. McCann
Review Date: 23 February 2009
IESG Telechat date: 26 February 2009

Summary: This document is ready for publication as Proposed Standard.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:

My comments from the previous review have been addressed.