Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
"Ori Finkelman (IETF)" <ori.finkelman.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 21 August 2019 21:08 UTC
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Date: Thu, 22 Aug 2019 00:08:10 +0300
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To: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
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> > Thank you Dan for your time and comments. > I'll fix them for the next revision. > > Best regards, > Ori > > On Tue, Aug 20, 2019, 12:09 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < > noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05 >> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> Review Date: 2019-08-20 >> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: >> This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of nits >> which >> could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major issues: >> None >> Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: >> >> 1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN >> 2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph '...the uCDN MUST be differnet >> ...' >> >> >>
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-c… Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Ori Finkelman (IETF)
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Ori Finkelman
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper