[Gen-art] gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-04

["Roni Even" <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013-12-8

IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-10

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

1.  In section 3.1 last paragraph  "If the peer has not advertised the
corresponding capability, then label messages using the HSMP FEC Element
SHOULD NOT be sent to the  peer. ". Why use a SHOULD NOT and not MUSR NOT

 

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

1.	In section 2 for PTP IEEE1588 need a reference. There is a reference
in the reference section but it is not used. Also the tictoc reference is
not used.