[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-v6-ext-communities-02.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Mon, 06 July 2009 10:24 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-v6-ext-communities-02.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-v6-ext-communities-02.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 06 July 2009 IETF LC End Date: 07 July 2009 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC. Nits/editorial comments: The IANA considerations sections failed to mention that the intended new registry is effectively a subregistry of the existing "Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Data Collection Standard Communities" registry. I've noticed that IANA has understood the missing text correctly, so this is not a big issue. But if you have to update the document it would be nice to see the text accurately written. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
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