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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-validate-09

John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> Fri, 05 October 2012 20:32 UTC

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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-validate-09
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Pete,

Your Section 4 change looks fine to me, thanks.

The "monkey-in-the-middle" terminology is Randy's and I will defer to him. (I've added him to the To:)

--John

On Oct 1, 2012, at 6:56 PM, Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document:  draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-validate-09
> Reviewer:  Peter McCann
> Review Date:  2012-10-01
> IETF LC End Date:  2012-10-01
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Section 4:
>    An "affected prefix" is any prefix that
>   was matched by a deleted or updated mapping, or could be matched by
>   an added mapping.
> SHOULD BE:
>   An "affected prefix" is any prefix that
>   was matched by a deleted or updated mapping, or could be matched by
>   an added or updated mapping.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Abstract:
>   monkey-in-the-middle
> That's a game of keep-away.  Did you mean man-in-the-middle?  Perhaps
> this is a technical term that has been discussed on the mailing list.
>

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