Re: [Gen-art] [nfsv4] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-07

worley@ariadne.com Thu, 28 May 2020 03:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [nfsv4] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-07
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Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> writes:
>> I think you want s/must/MUST/.  There's also an unstated requirement
>> that the RPC consumers have some way of accessing this information.
>
> IMHO the non-normative form of "must" is appropriate in this case.
>
>  - The text is not specific enough to be part of an enforceable normative
>    compliance statement.
>
>  - The remark here is about an internal RPC consumer API, as you note.
>    Such APIs are not something on which this document can place hard
>    requirements.
>
> However, I'm open to further comments and discussion.

Hmmm, I think I'll leave that to the Security Directorate.

Dale