Re: [Gen-art] [Extra] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-messagelimit-08

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Tue, 12 March 2024 14:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Extra] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-messagelimit-08
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Hi Russ,

Thank you for your review.

On 08/03/2024 16:29, Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote:

> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Ready
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-extra-imap-messagelimit-08
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2024-03-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-25
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
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> Summary: Ready
>
>
> Major Concerns:
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> None
>
>
> Minor Concerns:
>
> This document contains the disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work.  Is this
> because it builds upon the capability defined in RFC 3501?  If so, then
> you can ignore this concern.  If it is something else, then I would like
> to see a rationale in the document, even if it is put in a place that
> will not be part of the final RFC.
Yes, I think some text was copied.
> Nits:
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> IDnits reports:
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>    ** There are 13 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest
>       one being 23 characters in excess of 72.
>
> At lease one of these long lines was a problem for me as a reader.
> I suspect that all of the long lines are in the C:/S: examples.
I will sot this out with RFC Editor.
> I do not see the point of an Index at the back of the document that only
> has one entry.

Right, will remove.

Best Regards,

Alexey